March Update: Part 17

[mahastory]

Interlude: Kritavarma

Very very short update, sorry.

But next month's update will be another megachapter. ;)

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Thank you for updating. Can't wait for the longer chapter. I hope it is in early to mid April...


Thanks.

Oh, and loved your little (not so) innocent Krishna. :)

[mahastory.livejournal.com]

Thank you for the feedback! Kishna is somebody who I'm the most worried about getting wrong, or just plain writing offensively. I'm glad to hear that he's working out so far. :) And if I *do* ever cross into wrong/offensive territory with him, please let me know!

[(Anonymous)]

You are doing just fine with him :) Your characters are too awesome to be offensive :)

[goldenflames.livejournal.com]

Since you laugh at all of my snarky jokes about him, I highly doubt that you'd ever be offensive.


Besides, even he went through a learning process, so expecting your younger Krishna to act the same way the older one would doesn't reallly make sense.