Hi. I followed your link from another blog doing another Mahabharata version. I really liked your take on the story, especially the character of Duryodhana. I hope you do update it soon though.
The last chapter showed a strength in Yadhishtira's character that was missing earlier. I would really like to see how his character unfurls as I feel that his character in your story has still not evolved to the awe inspiring "hero" of the epic (I don't know whether it happens or not in your version!!).
Best of luck!